Thank you Liz. I forgot to show images of teeth being rattled from their gums and eyes spinning in eye-sockets whilst stomach churns…editing was required!
I know right? Three years…more actually if I count the years I didn’t join the community but it IS fun to do (I should have been working myself but what do I do, I draw shaped poems…)
OK. That is amazing. Crescendo. Unavoidable imagery AND sound. Congrats!
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Thank you Liz. I forgot to show images of teeth being rattled from their gums and eyes spinning in eye-sockets whilst stomach churns…editing was required!
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Oh my!
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Between birds singing and peace, I felt and heard it to tears. Wow!
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Gloria, Thank you for for reading and commenting. Man and nature are not always such easy bedfellows
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F**king brilliant!!!
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Thank you
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This was so much fun to read–love the crossing lines and the different size fonts.😍
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I should have been doing different work, but this was more challenging. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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I LOVE THIS. Yes, the different sized fonts really add to the poem and I can hear the noise! DIABOLICAL indeed!
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Thank you Shuku. Three years of NaPoWriMo. It takes a few days to get into, but this I enjoyed working at.
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I know right? Three years…more actually if I count the years I didn’t join the community but it IS fun to do (I should have been working myself but what do I do, I draw shaped poems…)
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