On Water xiv

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1. Little Charmer says:

   24th April 2021 at 14:19

   🖤🖤

2. Angela van Son says:

   24th April 2021 at 07:20

   Respect without trust. Makes total sense! I like how calmly your poem expresses this uncalm landscape. The contrast works really well. It puts the focus on the landscape instead of the language.

   1. Christopher Perry says:

      24th April 2021 at 07:35

      Good morning Angela! Hope all well across the German Ocean, as my old atlas labels the water that separates us. Thank you. Four lines on a haiku seems extravagant , but lovely to read! Much appreciated. 🙏

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