Time #2

robin, sparrow, pigeon

motorway, next door’s children

blue sky, white walls, dawn bright

silver birch shine, heat of sheet

sourness of sweat, weight of limb

heavy head, weary heart

click of clock, click of clock

click of clock, laughing gull


CLP 16/06/2021


  1. I felt that click of clock, and all.

    1. Thank you. I am working on use of repetition, so it seems to have worked this time. I am very grateful that you send your thoughts.

      I really like your blog, by the way. Your photographs and commentary are both beautiful and fascinating!

      1. Ah, great to hear! Thank you! Yes, I’ve noticed that you pushed the follow button. šŸ™‚ Welcome!

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