A Broken Heart

Flapping desperately on the highway

Trying to escape its precarious position

In the centre of the outside lane

Strangely stuck to the tarmac

Black wings flashing deep blue

When catching the last light



What drew it down here?

What prevented escape?

A bit of victim blaming, I admit

Did this crow delay departing?

Stay for one last peck

of the warm flesh that caught its eye?



On-coming couples in cosy cars

Saw the distressed crow ahead

Feathers thrashing a syncopated beat

Each driver steering carefully over

So not to be the one to end the misery

Hopelessly hoping it might escape, as once they did

~

CLP 08/04/2023

4 Comments

  1. Donna M Day says:

    Beautiful and eerie.

    1. Thank you for reading and commenting, Donna. Funny what sticks in your mind as you travel, or at least, in mine!

  2. kim881 says:

    Such a tragic poem. The poor crow was only attracted to carrion, probably hungry, and so desperate to escape from the tarmac – you captured it so well. I love the lies:
    ‘Black wings flashing deep blue
    When catching the last light’
    which suggests its demise,
    and the well-observed:
    ‘Feathers thrashing their syncopated beat
    Each driver steering carefully over
    So not to be the one to end the misery’.

  3. Chris, you took such care with describing this sad scene. The last line powerfully connected us to the crow. Beautifully done.

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