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  1. Oooooh this says it all in a look. I really like this one!

    1. Thank you Shuku. It is a moment caught in a moment – it captures a point of letting go for me. Painful but necessary

  2. I’m sorry it was painful. Necessity is a bitch sometimes, and letting go is difficult either way. You’ve described the moment so well, I can see it.

  3. That said, I forgot: Here’s my Day 2, I’m behind but that is a necessity for me too, these days.

    https://shukuen.blogspot.com/2019/04/glopowrimo-day-2-taking-up-space.html

    1. Commuting; where strangers sit closer than friends

      1. I feel you have added a stronger, more confident voice to your writing sonce I last read your poetry

      2. Commuting in Asia, where personal space is non-existent! And re: the stronger voice – thank you so much! It’s been a difficult few weeks actually, because I didn’t want to write any more because I was afraid of writing the Wrong Things, so it is really encouraging to hear.

      3. “wrong things” need to be written about, but not necessarily published. Wringing out the wrong helps you write what is right.

      4. And look at what your readers are saying in your comments!