I had a question on the tip of my tongue
But when I saw your face I knew
The answer
Please don’t ask it said
Do you really need me to say?
.
Day 2: Make your last line a question.
CLP 02/04/2019
I had a question on the tip of my tongue But when I saw your face I knew The answer Please don’t ask it said Do you really need me to say? . Napowrimo 2019 Day 2: Make your last line a question. CLP 02/04/2019
I had a question on the tip of my tongue
But when I saw your face I knew
The answer
Please don’t ask it said
Do you really need me to say?
.
Day 2: Make your last line a question.
CLP 02/04/2019
9 responses
Oooooh this says it all in a look. I really like this one!
Thank you Shuku. It is a moment caught in a moment – it captures a point of letting go for me. Painful but necessary
I’m sorry it was painful. Necessity is a bitch sometimes, and letting go is difficult either way. You’ve described the moment so well, I can see it.
That said, I forgot: Here’s my Day 2, I’m behind but that is a necessity for me too, these days.
https://shukuen.blogspot.com/2019/04/glopowrimo-day-2-taking-up-space.html
Commuting; where strangers sit closer than friends
I feel you have added a stronger, more confident voice to your writing sonce I last read your poetry
Commuting in Asia, where personal space is non-existent! And re: the stronger voice – thank you so much! It’s been a difficult few weeks actually, because I didn’t want to write any more because I was afraid of writing the Wrong Things, so it is really encouraging to hear.
“wrong things” need to be written about, but not necessarily published. Wringing out the wrong helps you write what is right.
And look at what your readers are saying in your comments!