
After the eulogy
No music, thank you
Let silence fill the room
Its clamour echo from the rafters
Its cacophony fill our heads
Its weight press on our ears
Let us hear the beating of hearts
~
n.b. NaPoWriMo 2025 Day 28 The picture is from St Peter’s, Hoveton, Norfolk, built in 1624.

CLP 28/04/2025
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Very poignant
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Melanie, thank you. Music can be overdone. Awkward silence is not always a bad thing.
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And very apt for funeral.
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Beautiful use of juxtaposition. It’s a soft thud.
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
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🖤🖤
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