
robin, sparrow, pigeon
motorway, next door’s children
blue sky, white walls, dawn bright
silver birch shine, heat of sheet
sourness of sweat, weight of limb
heavy head, weary heart
click of clock, click of clock
click of clock, laughing gull
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CLP 16/06/2021
3 responses to “Time #2”
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I felt that click of clock, and all.
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Thank you. I am working on use of repetition, so it seems to have worked this time. I am very grateful that you send your thoughts.
I really like your blog, by the way. Your photographs and commentary are both beautiful and fascinating!
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Ah, great to hear! Thank you! Yes, I’ve noticed that you pushed the follow button. 🙂 Welcome!